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Cristine Reyesby ~curray

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I've been doing this for about a week. Yeah. I know it too. It has so many flaws. I've learn so much when I was working with this vector Image. This should be a whole body picture but I cut it into a portrait scale. why? Because I'm working with a low-res photo and its hard to work with one.

Okay! enough with the reasoning! Here I present you one of the sexiest women in the philippines Cristine Reyes!

heres the original: [link]

please give me some comments for me to improve my work. Thank you!
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~etongers Nov 10, 2010
wher i can do this?
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~curray Nov 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sa Adobe Illustrator.
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~sha-nu Oct 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice vector~ ^^

my only suggestion would be to clean up the lines a colour fills a bit afterwards. =)
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~curray Oct 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
can you explain further? I want to improve.
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~sha-nu Oct 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
for example: the right side (shown on the left in the image) of the bra.. at the base.. you can see some parts where the skin colour goes outside the lines where it shouldn't.. and the same goes for the left side, actually.. and the inside of the elbow.. etc.. and at the top of the hair there are a few stray lines escaping.. i know hair is generally messy, which is why the lower half of the hair has those strands escaping too.. but in my opinion, at the top, it looks like those few strands were unintentionally escaping the main hair area..

i know it's really annoying to pay attention to such small details (i skim over them a lot and have to force myself to go back to fix them.. if i can be bothered.) but it makes a huge difference and people can see how much care and effort you put into the work even more. =)
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~curray Oct 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:wow: totally speechless. you've given me a time to evaluate my work. I'm totally honored. your right about the details you've said. I didn't notice it :stupidme: maybe because of frustrations. Thanks again. I'm not gonna change this to remind myself on your corrections. :salute:
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Mood: Joy ~sha-nu Oct 13, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it is frustrating. i got frustrated with my latest work, and did a really scrappy job of the skirt. i realised i was frustrated and decided that i should leave it and come back later, when i'm in a better mood (which turned out to be the next day.. but sometimes, for me, it's a week or more).

if you start to feel frustrated, i suggest you try the same. it actually helps a lot. you may be excited that you're really close to finishing, or have done a lot, and just want to have it finished and uploaded, but sometimes you really just have to put it down for a while. =)

but yea.. i think you have a lot of potential and skill. keep working on it~ =D (i'm gonna watch you, if you don't mind, so i can see your new works. ^^)
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~curray Oct 13, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:wow: A live critic. I need that. Its my pleasure someone like you will watch my works and gives a suggestions and corrections. Maybe I have to keep an eye on you too. I see some of your works and I'm jealous on your photography skills :D... seriously :|

About the frustrations :frustrated:... I guess its really not an excuse for others (mostly in jobs) but I really feel like leaving my work for a while and rest just like what you've said. And maybe your right. It can reflect on what you're working with. We can see it obviously in this example. :D

Many thanks =sha-nu
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~michael0118 Oct 1, 2010
nice!:headbang:
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Mood: Joy ~curray Oct 1, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
salamat sa pag :+fav: ser!
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